“Mr. Speaker, changes to the New Horizons for Seniors program are threatening hundreds of community projects. Organizations have barely a month to register as a business, obtain a registration number and then submit their projects. Otherwise, they will be disqualified. Yesterday, the Secretary of State for Seniors responded to this concern by telling them to figure it out themselves, that there is still plenty of time. For these volunteers who have no resources, July 14 may as well be tomorrow. Will the government delay its changes instead of treating our community organizations with contempt?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 19 wordswe announced these changes to the New Horizons for Seniors program almost a month before the applications opened up, 1Reasoning · 17 wordsand we made these changes, requiring the CRA business number, to ensure the integrity of the program.2Procedure · 10 wordsHere is what CanAge has to say about these changes.ProcedureClaims · 45 wordsIt has said that it is pleased to see this important step to ensure the integrity of the program.3It believes that the simplified grant format, ease of reporting requirements and significant supports available for community-based organizations ensure that this program remains accessible and inclusive.4