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Patty Hajdu

95 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Chak Au (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada is seeing a growing homeless senior population. Emergency shelters are overflowing, and seniors are saying that they do not feel safe staying in them. After working their entire lives, seniors surviving on a pension should not be sleeping in restaurants or searching for a safe place to spend the night. Canadians deserve better than this Liberal-made affordability crisis. Will the Prime Minister reverse his costly policies that created this crisis, so Canadians can afford to live again?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 53%Claims 47%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 23 wordsmaybe that member of Parliament wants to look at the voting record of his party. In fact, the Conservatives have fought against seniors.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 45 wordsThey have fought against increases to OAS, and they have fought against increases to GIS, very important supplements to seniors’ income. Every step of the way, as we have given seniors the support and the dignity they need, the Conservatives have voted against those measures.1 Positioning · 27 wordsIt is shameful to hear them get up in this House and talk about supporting seniors when they could very easily lend their hand to the work.PositioningOff point

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