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Patty Hajdu

96 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Jonathan Rowe (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I am going to let that minister in on a little secret. These ferries are a federal Crown corporation. Canada has just entered into a recession. Tourism businesses across this country are still having to pay off COVID debt. More small businesses in this country are closing than opening. Insolvencies are higher since 2000. Nobody in Canada and in Newfoundland can afford this strike, including the union workers. Will this federal Crown corporation and these Liberals take responsibility, and get a fair deal for Marine Atlantic workers?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 49%Reasoning 18%Promise 33%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsI think the president of the Crown corporation might be a bit surprised if the Prime Minister showed up to negotiate this collective agreement.Positioning Reasoning · 17 wordsInstead, we will do what we have done for centuries. We will let employers work with employees. Promise · 32 wordsWe will provide them with the support through the federal mediation service so they can negotiate this collective agreement, and we will help make sure they get that over the finish line.Vague promise Positioning · 23 wordsThat is how labour negotiations are done in this country, with respect for employers and for unions, something this member ought to know.Partly on pointMockery

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