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Kevin Lamoureux

84 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Kyle Seeback (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, luxury Normandy butter cups, beef tenderloin, braised beef with wine reduction and crème brûlée were included in 95,000 dollars’ worth of luxury meals on one flight, $1 million in the last 12 months. Meanwhile, a quarter of Canadians are food-insecure. Surely there is not a Liberal member who is going to stand up and justify that, when 2.2 million Canadians go to an increasingly empty food bank every single month.”
Statement grade
F
36 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 64%Claims 36%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 25 wordsI would look to Conservative Party members to actually demonstrate genuine sympathy and capacity to come up with ideas that will make a positive difference.PositioningOff point Claims · 10 wordsThe national food strategy that was announced yesterday is tangible.1Partly on point Positioning · 15 wordsUnlike the Conservatives, as a government we provide good ideas that will make a difference.Positioning Claims · 20 wordsThe Conservatives continue to vote against them, such as the national food program in our schools, 2which they called “garbage”.3 Positioning · 14 wordsWe will be there to have the backs of Canadians, contrary to the Conservatives.PositioningOff pointVague promise

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