“Mr. Speaker, six months ago I was standing in this very place, literally pleading with Conservative Party members to allow passage of Bill C‑14, recognizing just how popular this legislation was and the support it had. I literally was begging, saying we would sit until midnight and extend the sitting, how nice it would be to see this bill actually pass before Christmas, yet, once again, here we stand waiting for the Conservative Party to recognize just how important this legislation is and that it needs to pass. I am afraid that without this tool being used, it would be the intention of the Conservative Party to continue to postpone and never let this bill pass. Could the minister comment?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 103 wordsif we go back to the timeline the hon. member is citing, I raised with colleagues in different parties in the House my concern about the shenanigans being played out at justice committee that were preventing the advancement of this bill and the protecting victims act.1We are now in a position that reflects precisely the advice we provided to the opposition at the time, which was that we would potentially see months-long delays in the implementation of these bills, which they claim to support.We have an opportunity to take action today to combat extortion, home invasions, auto theft and sexual assault.2Reasoning · 16 wordsThe only question is whether we are going to act today or months down the road.Positioning · 21 wordsThat kind of delay is senseless and would not offer an ounce of contribution to public safety.We are moving forward.PositioningVague promiseThe ask · 30 wordsI would ask that all members recognize the urgency with which communities are calling for these measures so we can implement them in law before Parliament rises for the summer.