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Kevin Lamoureux

80 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, last year, in our election platform, we wrote: “A strong Canada means strong protections in our communities and a Criminal Code which is responsive to emerging issues and protects victims of crime and keeps our kids safe.” Since then, we have introduced several bills: Bill C‑14 makes it harder to get bail and imposes harsher penalties on criminals, particularly violent and repeat offenders; Bill C‑16 better protects victims of crime; and Bill C‑22 gives law enforcement access to the tools they need, particularly to fight crimes committed using modern technology. We have also introduced legislation to strengthen security at our borders. I would like to ask my colleague what he thinks about the work we have done over the past year to fulfill the campaign promises we made to make our communities safer.”
Statement grade
B+
81 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 22%Positioning 22%Claims 55%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 18 wordsthe core message I want to get across is that the motivating factor goes beyond the election platform; ProcedurePositioning · 10 wordsit is all about victims and making our communities safer.Positioning Claims · 44 wordsThat is where I believe the thrust has come from in terms of pushing forward what is likely the most aggressive legislative agenda dealing with crime in generations. I can assure members that every Liberal member of Parliament sees this as a top priority. Positioning · 8 wordsIt is all part of building Canada strong.PositioningPartly on point

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