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Jamie Schmale

94 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Tako Van Popta (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, earlier in the debate today, we heard the minister say that this agreement is a model to inform future treaties, yet the most recent treaty, the K’ómoks Treaty, which my colleague also mentioned, introduces the concept of UNDRIP, a foreign document. This is not made in Canada. Could my colleague comment on how important it is for Canada to stick to made-in-Canada solutions when we are drafting our treaties?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 44%Reasoning 36%The ask 20%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 41 wordsthat also brings the point we were discussing earlier, and yesterday in committee, that there are U.S. tribes that are trying to seek legal standing in decisions to be made in Canada, specifically around consultation, whether about energy projects or otherwise.1 Reasoning · 34 wordsU.S. tribes should not be interfering in decisions made in Canada. These are our projects and our resources, and these are our benefits to achieve. We do not need interference from any outside sources, The ask · 19 wordsso the government should be doing everything it can to ensure that our decisions are made domestically, not internationally.Partly on point

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