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Jamie Schmale

94 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Dan Albas (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Westbank First Nation is one of the indigenous communities in my riding. It obviously has its own governance agreement. Would the member enlighten us and say what he believes is a good message for people, not just in the Okanagan but right across B.C.? What would they like to hear from the Conservative Party right now?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 79%Reasoning 11%Positioning 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 37 wordsI think what I laid out in my speech is that economic activity and economic reconciliation benefit all people, whether they are indigenous or non-indigenous. We need to build quickly, and the government is not doing that. Reasoning · 10 wordsIf we build quickly, we have jobs, opportunity and wealth, Positioning · 10 wordsbut the government is throwing every barrier in the way.Positioning Claims · 37 wordsIn addition, I mentioned Tom Siddon and his wife, Pat, and the member will be happy to know that I mentioned the work they did on the land claim in 1993 to finalize it for those nations.1

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