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Wayne Long

90 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Tamara Kronis (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, when we sit in a committee with members opposite and officials who are unwilling to answer questions, we make whatever analogies we can to try to convince them to answer those questions. What we were talking about in committee, which was very important and very serious, was how we explain to Canadians what we are doing with CPP. That is very important to those in this country. Following the supposed filibuster that they are talking about, which was really questions about CPP, I got a phone call from a very senior finance executive who has worked for not one but two of the maple eight pension funds, telling me how important the work we are doing in finance committee is and saying how important it is to produce reports that explain, in plain English, what we are doing in the House to Canadians’ pensions. If the members opposite do not understand how important it is to make sure that there are no unintended consequences through the drafting of bills that affect Canadians’ pensions, then I do not know what to do. Perhaps the member could explain why he does not think Canadians should be able to get a full explanation about what the government is doing to Canadians’ pensions?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 56%Reasoning 6%Positioning 14%The ask 24%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 29 wordsI also met with the maple eight pension funds.1 The maple eight pension funds want us to get going to build our economy. They want to invest in Canada. Reasoning · 5 wordsCapital follows its easiest path, Claims · 21 wordsand right now, we are building major projects, investing in defence, investing in aerospace, investing in housing and investing in infrastructure. Positioning · 13 wordsWe are here to build an economy that is strong for all Canadians.PositioningVague promise The ask · 22 wordsIt is time for that member, and that party, to stop the filibuster. Let us get to work.Vague promise Let us build Canada.Partly on pointVague promise

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