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John Nater

139 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

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Claims 37%Positioning 37%Thanks 27%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 51 wordswords can barely describe the tragedy that took place in Mapleton on Friday evening, when five young lives were taken in the blink of an eye.1 Five children, ages four, six, eight, 10 and 12 years old, were killed in a horrible collision, 2and five other family members were seriously injured.3 Positioning · 20 wordsToday our thoughts and prayers are with the family and their community of Elmira as they grieve this unthinkable loss.Positioning Thanks · 25 wordsI want to thank the first responders, paramedics, police, and members of Mapleton fire department and neighbouring departments for the professionalism and compassion they displayed.Thanks Positioning · 13 wordsOur hearts are with each of them as they process what they witnessed.Positioning Thanks · 12 wordsI thank the neighbours and good Samaritans who rushed in to help.Thanks Positioning · 18 wordsToday our community is grieving, praying about, remembering and honouring five beautiful young lives taken far too soon.Positioning

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