Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Peter Fragiskatos

176 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

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Claims 40%Reasoning 19%Thanks 33%Positioning 5%Promise 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordsmore than 4,000 Canadians live with ALS, 1and June is ALS Awareness Month.2 ALS has been called a rare disease, Reasoning · 20 wordsbut that does not take away from the very real impacts it has on people who are living with it. Claims · 10 wordsALS attacks the nerve cells that are responsible for movement; 3Reasoning · 14 wordstherefore, basic human functions such as walking, speaking, breathing and much more are impacted. Claims · 40 wordsWhile the effects are gradual, they are absolutely devastating. For the month of June, when we reflect on ALS and what it means for those living with it, we also celebrate the resilience of those who have this terrible disease. Thanks · 35 wordsWe also think of their family, their friends, their health care workers and of course the researchers. The researchers are doing so much, not only to bring awareness to ALS but also to provide hope.Thanks Positioning · 8 words“Research”, of course, is another word for hope.Positioning Thanks · 23 wordsI thank them. I thank the ALS Society of Canada and ALS Action Canada, two incredible advocacy organizations doing so much as well.Thanks Promise · 6 wordsWe will continue this fight together.Vague promise

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