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Steven MacKinnon

84 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians are seeing through the illusions. The Liberals keep rolling out more programs and calling them progress. If we need more government supports just to get by, that is not success. It is an admission of failure. All of the G7 countries face the same global pressures, yet only one has managed to turn these shared challenges into a recession at home. That is our Canada under the Liberal Prime Minister. Since the same global pressures are affecting everyone, why is Canada the only G7 country in a recession, while others have managed to avoid it?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Claims 69%Promise 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 13 wordslet me tell the member and her entire bench what success looks like.Procedure Claims · 58 wordsSuccess looks like creating twice as many jobs per capita as the United States.1 Success looks like diversifying our trade. Success looks like Contrecœur.2 Success looks like high‑speed rail in Ontario and Quebec, 3Partly on pointwhich her party is against.4Off point Success looks like an MOU with the Province of Alberta.5 Success looks like economic development from one coast to another.Partly on point Promise · 13 wordsWe are going to keep getting success, notwithstanding the opposition of these guys.Off pointVague promise

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