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Patty Hajdu

90 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Rachael Thomas (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I think what that member meant to highlight was the fact that under the Liberal government, child poverty rates have increased year after year after year for the last three. This dramatically impacts the people of my riding in Lethbridge, Alberta. It means that seniors in this country are living at Tim Hortons. It means that full-time workers are living out of their RVs. Why does the government turn a blind eye to the reality of Canadians while it is living high on the horse? Why does it not reverse its policy so Canadians can finally afford to live again?”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 81%Reasoning 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 73 wordsif we check Hansard, we will find that member on record saying that parents do not want help.1Off point In fact, what I hear from Canadians, including Albertans, who write to me as the minister of jobs and families, is that we should stand up for each other, that we should make sure not one kid goes hungry, no matter if their parent is out of work, no matter if their family is struggling, Unearned certaintyReasoning · 17 wordsbecause circumstances are unfortunate for families. What is most Canadian is the value of helping each other.Partly on point

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