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Leslie Church

89 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Anna Roberts (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, community organizations are warning that the rush changes to the New Horizons for Seniors program are putting hundreds of projects at risk. Many volunteers are seniors who already struggle with technology. With only weeks to register for a CRA business number and navigate a complex online portal, these changes are overwhelming and many fear they will be disqualified. Will the Liberals fix these unnecessary barriers or will they have to create another program to help seniors apply for a current one?”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 8%Claims 92%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordswe are incredibly proud of this program.PositioningOff point Claims · 82 wordsLast year alone, it supported over 2,600 projects right across Canada, helping seniors stay active and engaged and fight isolation.1Partly on point This year, we are increasing the value of the grants and we are making some changes to strengthen the integrity of the program.Vague promise Service Canada is there to assist any organization with questions on how to apply and we are going to make sure that this program remains accessible for seniors and organizations, Vague promiseand meets the standards of integrity that Canadians expect.

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