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Leslie Church

91 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Anna Roberts (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the secretary of state claims that registering for a CRA business number and using the online portal is simple, but senior organizations are telling a different story. In my community of King—Vaughan, where 18 senior groups have been supporting over 6,000 senior volunteers, organizations have been frantically calling my office, scared of missing out on critical funding. These changes will leave the most vulnerable organizations behind. Why are the Liberals trying to bury seniors in even more red tape?”
Statement grade
C+
67 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 20%Claims 70%Promise 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 5 wordsit is quite the opposite.Positioning Claims · 38 wordsWe have worked hand in hand with organizations to ensure that these changes to this program are welcomed. We know that this program delivers important services for seniors in every single riding of every member in this House. Promise · 9 wordsThat is something that we are going to continue.Partly on pointVague promise Positioning · 13 wordsWe will take no lessons from the Conservatives in our support for seniors, PositioningClaims · 26 wordswhile they continue to vote against programs like the dental care plan and the groceries and essentials benefit that benefit single seniors right across the country.1Off point

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