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Shafqat Ali

57 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the press reports that Liberal MPs say the President of the Treasury Board is not very present, not very diligent and struggling to master his files. Last week, Canadians watched him stand in this House, unable to answer a very basic question about his own department. If the Prime Minister demands confidence from his ministers, does he still have confidence in the President of the Treasury Board, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Positioning 16%Claims 51%Thanks 33%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsCanada’s new government believes in transparency, accountability and fairness.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsAs the President of the Treasury Board, I have been meeting with government agents, including the Information Commissioner.1 We have launched consultations to modernize the access to information system.2Partly on point Thanks · 19 wordsI thank all the government agents, including the Information Commissioner, for their work to hold the government to account.Thanks

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