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Wayne Long

102 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Jacob Mantle (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, as the G7 gets under way, the Prime Minister remains the only leader of a G7 or G20 economy that is in recession. The Prime Minister should travel, but Canadians expect results from that. When he was back home in Ireland this weekend, investment was leaving Canada. On Saturday, Open Text’s Waterloo-based AI company announced a $140-million investment in Ireland. That is 400 new jobs for Ireland. Ireland has lower taxes, less regulation and a better business environment. Why did this investment not get made in Canada?”
Statement grade
D+
54 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 45%Claims 49%Procedure 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 19 wordsno one can understand the economy if they have never worked a day in it, like the Conservative leader.Off pointInsult Claims · 50 wordsMaybe he should listen to actual economists in Canada, like BMO’s chief economist, who said adding 88,000 jobs should silence the critics.1 What about RBC’s Frances Donald, who said that it is the wrong diagnosis, “neither accurate nor helpful”.2 The head of C.D. Howe gave his thoughts on the economy.Partly on point Procedure · 6 wordsI could go on and on.Procedure Positioning · 27 wordsOn this side of the House, we are going to build Canada strong.Vague promise The Conservative leader can continue with empty parking lot press conferences, props and slogans.PositioningOff point

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