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Marjorie Michel

80 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Matt Jeneroux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, we are facing a men’s mental health crisis. Too many men and boys face mental health challenges, and too many simply will not ask for help. Last week, we once again hosted an annual Father’s Day on the Hill event with Movember, where Montreal Canadiens great Guy Carbonneau shared his story and talked about the recent loss of his friend and teammate Claude Lemieux. As we mark Men’s Health Month in June, can the Minister of Health provide an update on the much anticipated men and boys’ health strategy?”
Statement grade
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Average 85 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 20%Claims 66%Promise 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordsI want to thank my colleague from Edmonton Riverbend for his tireless leadership on this issue.Thanks Claims · 53 wordsI am pleased to report that, thanks to his help and the help of groups such as Movember, more than 5,000 people shared their thoughts and ideas during our consultations for Canada’s first-ever men and boys’ health strategy.1 We heard many great ideas about how to create more opportunities for boys and men.Partly on point Promise · 11 wordsI look forward to releasing the strategy in the coming months.Vague promise

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