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John Barlow

99 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 57%Anecdote 21%Positioning 5%The question 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 22 wordsFoothills families are shaken. A local man was charged with more than 500,000 pieces of child exploitation material, 1and he was released.2 Anecdote · 21 wordsTen-year-old Grace asked me why this man was not in jail. She does not feel safe playing outside with her friends, AnecdotePositioning · 5 wordsand that is not right.Positioning Claims · 34 wordsOkotoks families want to know why a man charged with such a heinous crime was released into the community. Conservatives offered a solution, jail not bail for serious offences, 3but the Liberals rejected it.4 The question · 17 wordsWhen will the Liberals fix the bail system they broke so Okotoks families can feel safe again?

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