“Mr. Speaker, Foothills families are shaken. A local man was charged with more than 500,000 pieces of child exploitation material, and he was released. Ten-year-old Grace asked me why this man was not in jail. She does not feel safe playing outside with her friends, and that is not right. Okotoks families want to know why a man charged with such a heinous crime was released into the community. Conservatives offered a solution, jail not bail for serious offences, but the Liberals rejected it. When will the Liberals fix the bail system they broke so Okotoks families can feel safe again?”
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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 10 wordsthese kinds of heinous behaviours have no place in Canada, Claims · 91 wordsand the Government of Canada has an opportunity to do something about it.I am pleased to share that we expect, this week, we will have changes to Canada’s Criminal Code.These include changes that will make it impossible for conditional sentencing orders to be tied to charges impacting crimes such as sexual crimes against children.1In addition, last week the House voted on the protecting victims act, 2which would put in place a number of measures designed specifically to combat child sexual exploitation and child sexual exploitation and abuse material.3Promise · 16 wordsMy hope is that these measures will become law expeditiously, so communities benefit from these protections.
