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Sean Fraser

141 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Larry Brock (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the criminal charged in the Lambton College shooting, which left one person dead, is not surprisingly out on bail. Only under these weak-on-crime Liberals could a man charged with murder and attempted murder be back on the streets before justice is served. These Liberals have turned our justice system into a joke, a revolving door for violent offenders. Victims get fear; criminals get another chance. How many more accused killers do these Liberals intend to release before they finally admit that their weak-on-crime laws are a complete and catastrophic failure?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
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Positioning 11%Claims 77%Promise 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordsthe political motivation behind the member’s question is obvious, based on the way he phrased it, Off pointMotive imputedUnearned certaintyClaims · 109 wordsbut if he would like some validation, the bail and sentencing reform act we have put forward in the House is supported by those who work on the front lines.1 I would invite him to talk to the head of the Canadian Association of Chiefs of Police.2 I would invite him to talk to the head of the Ontario Provincial Police or of the Police Association of Ontario.3 The legislation we put forward has been informed by leaders in the police movement. It has been informed by provinces and premiers demanding the expeditious adoption of the bail and sentencing reform act.4 It has been informed by engagement with cities. Promise · 16 wordsWe will do everything we can to listen to those expert voices to keep Canadians safe.Vague promise

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