“Mr. Speaker, that minister and the government have had 11 years to get this right. Last week, Canada suffered a tragic loss when officer Marc Pinizzotto was shot and killed in the line of duty. It has now been revealed that the man responsible for the horrific crime was already out on probation. Then we learned that the U.S. consulate shooter was on bail. Thugs, who are already before the courts, known to police and prohibited from possessing firearms, are now back on the streets. This should have never happened. How many more tragedies will it take before these Liberals stop treating bail conditions like a joke and start keeping repeat violent offenders behind bars?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 61 wordsas I have indicated before, we are deeply heartbroken that Constable Marc Pinizzotto of the Toronto Police Service and Constable Tarun Bali of the Ontario police service were killed in the line of duty last week.1Partly on pointWe as a government have been taking decisive action, including strengthening bail and sentencing, with bills that we expect to go through Parliament this week.2Reasoning · 21 wordsWe need to work in collaboration to ensure the safety and security of all those who serve on the front lines.Procedure · 5 wordsWe are taking those actions.ProcedureThe ask · 14 wordsWe invite the party opposite to join us in order to strengthen these systems.
