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Jasraj Hallan

93 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians keep hearing announcements about new funds, new agencies, new strategies and new spending programs. Could my colleague explain why, after 10 years of these announcements, Canadians are facing higher housing costs, higher grocery bills and lower affordability, rather than the prosperity they were promised?”
Statement grade
B–
71 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 55%Claims 45%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 4 wordsmy colleague is right.Positioning Claims · 5 wordsThings get left as announcements. Positioning · 33 wordsI will give an A+ to the Liberal government for grand announcements, but they get an F when it comes to delivery. They are always showboating about what they are going to do.Positioning Claims · 37 wordsFor example, the current finance minister made a grand show when he said he was going to lower grocery prices by Thanksgiving 2023.1 That was his promise, but grocery prices have gone up by 40% since then.2 Positioning · 14 wordsThe Liberals fail to deliver, and Canadians end up paying for this costly failure.Positioning

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