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Tamara Jansen

99 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to John-Paul Danko (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank the member opposite. I think she did a great job of highlighting and reiterating a number of government announcements, so I want to thank her for reannouncing that good news here in the House. She mentioned new announcements and new commitments every few weeks, and I concur. That is exactly what we are doing. I think there is a fundamental difference, though, between our perceptions of what is spending versus what is an investment. When we hear the members opposite talk about spending, they are coming from a “Canada is broken” world view, whereas on this side of the House, we believe in Canada, we believe in Canadians, and that is why we are investing in Canada. Would the member not agree that is exactly what we were elected to do?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Positioning 30%Reasoning 37%Promise 32%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsI would not agree that the Liberals were elected to make a whole bunch of announcements and get nothing done.Positioning Reasoning · 17 wordsConservatives believe in the basic principle that government does not create prosperity by endlessly spending borrowed money. Promise · 32 wordsWe would focus on getting costs down, removing barriers to investments, speeding up approvals, supporting the workers and businesses that actually build homes and grow food, Vague promiseand restoring discipline to federal spending.Vague promise Positioning · 10 wordsCanadians do not need more slogans, funds, agencies and strategies.Positioning Reasoning · 20 wordsThey need a government that measures success by results: lower costs, more homes, stronger paycheques and a more competitive economy.

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