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Warren Steinley

157 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to John Brassard (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I am really glad that the hon. member brought up the Snowbirds, because this past weekend, the Barrie Airshow was held. There were 150,000 people who attended the air show. I was fortunate that I had the member for Moose Jaw—Lake Centre—Lanigan come to Barrie, because he has been leading the fight to keep the Snowbirds flying. He heard from a lot of people how disappointed they were that the Snowbirds have actually been cancelled. The main concern is that this five-year hiatus may turn to six years, to 10 years and then to their never returning. I am wondering what the hon. member would do to keep the Snowbirds flying.”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 54%Anecdote 22%Promise 16%Positioning 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 15 wordsit is truly heartbreaking that, under the Liberals, the Snowbirds are going to be grounded.1 Anecdote · 34 wordsI remember, as a young kid, our driving to Moose Jaw from our farm in Rush Lake and watching air shows for the Snowbirds.2 Seeing those planes in the sky was a special moment.Anecdote Claims · 70 wordsIn Barrie, 150,000 people got to see that for the last time.3 The fact that the Liberals did not have a plan to make sure that the Snowbirds could keep flying and had proper jets to keep flying is a damnation on their record. They had 11 years to make a plan, 4and they failed. That is why we are not going to have the Snowbirds for the foreseeable future. Promise · 25 wordsWe would do whatever we could and help them in any way to make sure we could get planes so the Snowbirds could keep flying.Vague promise Positioning · 13 wordsIt is just really sad for our Canadian identity and our Canadian heritage.Positioning

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