Analysis · Speech on a motion · beta

Kevin Lamoureux

424 words · 23 sentences · 26 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 1%Aside 2%Claims 55%Procedure 28%Positioning 10%Promise 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 6 wordsI am actually happy to speak.Greeting Aside · 9 wordsI am sure my Conservative friends do not mind.Aside Claims · 15 wordsJust over a year ago, Canada elected a new prime minister and a new government.1Partly on point Procedure · 47 wordsWith respect to what we have done, I actually ran out of time to expand on it. I would like to amplify a few things we have been able to accomplish in just over a year since Canadians made the decision to elect our current Prime Minister.Procedure Claims · 35 wordsThe very first action taken by the government was actually getting rid of the carbon tax.2 The second action was to provide a tax break for Canadians.3 Twenty‑two million Canadians benefited from that tax break.4 Procedure · 20 wordsLet us also take a look at one of our social programs the Prime Minister and the government made permanent: ProcedureClaims · 81 wordsthe school food program, with 400,000 young children being able to be fed a meal on the school premises.5 We can also talk about the groceries and essentials benefit changeover, in which we gave a substantive increase to deal with the issue of affordability. The first payment went out just yesterday.6 We have things such as the break on the gas excise tax, a 10¢‑a‑litre reduction.7 When we combine that with the carbon tax, we are talking about 25¢ a litre.8 Positioning · 23 wordsThese are the types of things the government has done, recognizing the importance of affordability and working towards giving a break to Canadians.Positioning Procedure · 19 wordsLet us take a look at some of the economic measures we have been able to put into place.Procedure Claims · 8 wordsI am thinking of the one Canadian economy, Procedure · 34 wordswhich is something I was able to expand on during my previous intervention. Then we can take a look at the major projects. What I did not highlight about the major projects is that, ProcedureClaims · 94 wordsif we think of it in terms of the amount of money, investment in capital, in infrastructure in every region of our great nation, we will see that we are going into well in excess of $120 billion.9 It is happening in every region. When we take a look at it from our perspective, we are establishing a goal of five years and $1 trillion of overall capital investment into Canada’s economic trading opportunities and so forth.10 We are also investing in the Canadian military and recognizing the importance of establishing a sovereignty fund. Positioning · 18 wordsThese are part of what we have been able to accomplish in a relatively short period of time.Positioning Promise · 15 wordsThere is a lot more to come as the Prime Minister and government move forward.Partly on pointVague promise

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