“Mr. Speaker, I really appreciate the hon. secretary of state bringing forth closure on this very important legislation, it being a key campaign promise. I happen to represent the majority of the Hamilton Jewish community, who are extremely supportive of the bill and the protections it would offer for their places of worship, their synagogues, and the places where they gather and deserve to be safe. I was wondering if the hon. secretary of state could talk about the consultation that has gone into this legislation and the need for it to be passed as quickly as possible.”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 91 wordsmany community groups have been asking for the government to take action, as we have seen a rise in hate crimes against many people of different ethnic backgrounds, religions and races.1This is important.The LGBTQ community has also faced a rise in hate in this country.2This is part of a larger set of initiatives that we as a government are taking.There is the Canada community security program, 3which we have heavily invested in.There is Canada’s action plan on combatting hate.4We are doing work to collect data.Reasoning · 16 wordsHowever, it is important to also deter and punish those who take part in hate crimes.Claims · 13 wordsThose who commit them will face harsher penalties after the bill is passed.5