“Mr. Speaker, it is always a pleasure to rise on behalf of the people of Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola. Before I begin, I want to recognize Paul and Elly Major, the parents of Dr. Blair Major, a faculty member of Thompson Rivers University in my riding, on their 50th wedding anniversary. I congratulate Paul and Elly. We heard a member talk about people who cannot go to synagogues. There was actually a synagogue that was shot up, and that has now been tied to a terrorist who was then alleged to have been connected to a police officer who has been killed. We have had an unprecedented number of churches being burned with nary a word from the government. We have had people who cannot access their places of worship, and the government has not sufficiently denounced it. Forgive me if I say that the government’s words ring hollow after 12 years of inaction.”
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsthe Conservative argument is so disingenuous.PositioningClaims · 69 wordsIn the hate crime or the shooting that happened at the U.S. consulate, the RCMP and local law enforcement investigated that incident.1There were actors who belonged to a terrorist organization.2It has been reported and alleged that they were working out of the United States of America and were plotting events here in Canada and in Europe.3Our law agencies were investigating and were on top of it, Thanks · 16 wordsand so I give them a lot of credit for the investigation that they have done.ThanksClaims · 25 wordsHowever, they could also use more investigative tools, like those in Bill C-22 respecting lawful access, 4but the Conservatives have been standing in their way.5Positioning · 13 wordsHow many more victims are the Conservatives going to create by their obstruction?Positioning