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Rhonda Kirkland

147 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
C–
Average 59 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 9%Anecdote 52%Claims 21%Reasoning 5%The question 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 13 wordsit is a privilege to rise on behalf of the residents of Oshawa.Greeting Anecdote · 77 wordsI would like to start my question by mentioning my father. Today would have been his 85th birthday.1 He passed away four years ago, just 10 and a half months after my mom passed away.2 When I was a teenager, there was a lot of talk about hate speech and hate crimes and defining them. I remember him saying to me, at that time, to watch carefully because this will turn into something else as time progresses.Anecdote Claims · 31 wordsWhat it will turn into is that, one day, our government will say that a certain piece of scripture or religious text will be deemed hate speech or a hate crime.Unearned certainty Reasoning · 7 wordsThat is a real concern for me. The question · 19 wordsWhy should Canadians trust these guys not to do exactly that and imprison people for speaking their religious truth?

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