“Mr. Speaker, all members in the House want to combat anti-Semitism, Islamophobia and hate in all of its forms. Our concern is that the bill is performative and that it is more words in a space where there are already too many words. I would like to know if the minister can tell me who can be arrested the day after Bill C-9 passes who cannot be arrested today and that it is going to result in the elimination of Islamophobia, anti-Semitism and hate, which he says is going to happen when the bill passes.”
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Positioning 6%Claims 94%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordswe should use common sense here.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 94 wordsThe bill is not just words; it would be a law.This is the most important thing that a government can do, which is to very seriously look at the law and change it to secure citizens where they worship and go to school.Partly on pointOn the display of hate symbols, there is a new category as well.1This would give police guidance when there is obstruction and intimidation in front of schools, universities, community centres and places of worship.2The hon. member knows these are not just mere words.This would be the law.