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Jacob Mantle

176 words · 8 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Andrew Lawton (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I cannot thank my colleague from York—Durham enough, not just for his speech tonight but for his tremendous leadership on Bill C‑9, meeting with faith communities, members of the Jewish community, the Muslim community, the Christian community, all across the country, people who have raised concerns, people whom the government says it is protecting but who feel the opposite is true. One of the comments that stuck out from what my colleague said was with regard to the selective nature of how we define hate and how hate laws are applied. I will note that, earlier in the House, a member of the Liberals gave an enumerated list of people who have experienced hate in this country, and both times he did that, he left out Christians, despite the fact that 123 Christian churches have been burned or vandalized over the last five years. As I say that now, Liberals are groaning and laughing, which speaks exactly to what I am saying. What does my colleague think about the fact that, even right now, the Liberals are laughing at the idea that Christians could be the target of hate?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Signal
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Anecdote 44%Thanks 4%Claims 23%Reasoning 17%Positioning 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 78 wordsbeing involved in this debate has actually been an amazing experience for me personally because it has allowed me to reach and speak with other faith communities, which I would not otherwise have had the chance to do. I met with Muslim groups in Toronto and Jewish groups in my own riding.1 I had a different faith and a different view of the world, but we were in complete alignment on Bill C‑9. It was actually quite amazing.AnecdotePartly on point Thanks · 7 wordsMy hon. colleague raises a great point, ThanksClaims · 40 wordswhich is the selective nature of what the government considers hate. He points out a very good example, that regardless of which lists the Liberals use or which groups they identify, they seem to leave out some and include others. Reasoning · 30 wordsUnfortunately, that leaves us to conclude that some people, in their view, are more equal than others. This is why we are so concerned when they get involved in censorship, Positioning · 21 wordsbecause we know which groups they think deserve protection and we know which groups they think do not deserve that protection.Positioning

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