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Kevin Lamoureux

137 words · 8 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Greg Fergus (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, the hon. parliamentary secretary made reference to one of the symbols noted in the amendment, which is the noose. As he knows, it is an issue of particular importance to Black Canadians. I wonder if he could discuss why it is important to list symbols such as the noose as hate symbols.”
Statement grade
C
63 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 12%Procedure 9%Anecdote 42%Reasoning 31%Claims 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 17 wordsI thank my colleague for the question because it allows me to highlight what Senator Bernard indicated.Thanks Procedure · 12 wordsI made reference to it at the very beginning of my speech.Procedure Anecdote · 57 wordsIt is a fairly long quote, but the essence of it is an individual who was sitting around a dinner table, then went out for an evening walk, where there was all sorts of language used by someone driving a truck toward her, telling her to go back to Africa, 1and on the truck was a noose.Anecdote Reasoning · 43 wordsIt would be exceptionally intimidating and life-threatening. Racism to that degree hurts in many different ways. To deny that reality, I think, does a great disservice. As parliamentarians, I think we need to recognize where Canadians are hurt by symbols, and take action. Claims · 8 wordsThat is exactly what Bill C-9 would do.2

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