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Harb Gill

101 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Amarjeet Gill (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague has expressed many concerns in his speech on Bill C‑9. Bill C‑9 removes the long‑standing good‑faith religious defence from the Criminal Code. As a justice and human rights committee member, I spoke with many religious leaders and faith communities who have expressed concerns that sermons, religious teachings and sacred texts could be drawn into a criminal investigation. My question for the member is this: Why is the Liberal government weakening protections for freedom of religion instead of strengthening them?”
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B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 70%Reasoning 30%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 71 wordsOfficer Pinizzotto did not die investigating a sermon. He died investigating hate crimes.1 He died investigating a shooting at the U.S. consulate.2 I can tell members from experience that, generally speaking, police officers are not out there challenging people at a religious ceremony to say whether the sermon is allowed or not allowed.Unearned certainty Police officers are not the experts. They do not have the wherewithal to do all of those things. Reasoning · 30 wordsThe challenge is that when we have unclear legislation, it causes confusion. That lack of clarity is going to cause more harm in our country, rather than solve any problems.Partly on point

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