“Mr. Speaker, I would first like to tell my colleague how deeply moved I am by what he just said. I also want to go back to the comments that a Conservative member made yesterday about the noose, which I think were shameful. Here in Canada, no one should feel unsafe because of who they are, what religion they practise, or where they gather. Recent incidents of Islamophobia have left too many people feeling vulnerable. Could my colleague tell us how Bill C-9 will help our constituents feel safer?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 25 wordsBill C-9 seeks to guarantee Canadians the safety and security to which they are entitled.It also establishes a clear and precise definition of hatred.1The ask · 17 wordsToday, the member for York—Durham has the opportunity to rise in the House and withdraw his remarks.2Off point