“Mr. Speaker, it is indeed unfortunate. We see the winding down of debate on Bill C‑9, an important piece of legislation that deals with hate. It is one of many pieces of legislation that this Prime Minister and this government have introduced since the last federal election, just over a year ago. Canadians will know, and realize, that the Government of Canada is serious about dealing with crime. On the other hand, we have the Conservatives, who like to talk about it, raise money on it and spread misinformation on it, but when it comes right down to supporting good policy, they are found wanting. They consistently vote against good crime-fighting legislation. Today we are talking hate. The question is why?”
Statement grade
D+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 73. The grade is held to 51, 30 above Relevance.
51 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 25%Claims 57%Reasoning 18%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordsthe member’s accusations of misinformation are disappointing and do little to address any concerns being raised by Canadians.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 41 wordsIn the past decade of Liberal rule, the country has only become more divided.Ethnic violence between immigrants and the division we have seen in Alberta, the division we have seen between new Canadians, are just because of the Liberals’ policies.Off pointReasoning · 13 wordsEven Bill C-9 would create more division than it would bring Canadians together.Partly on point