Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Greg McLean

177 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 100 / 100
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Claims 66%Reasoning 23%The ask 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 32 wordslast week, Calgary’s Royal Canadian Legion Branch No. 1 hosted and was addressed by the leader of the Conservative Party on the importance of building a strong Alberta within a united Canada.1 Reasoning · 9 wordsIt was exactly the right place for that message. Claims · 85 wordsBuilt in 1922 as Memorial Hall, it was Calgary’s primary tribute to those Canadians who served and sacrificed in the First World War.23 For more than a century, Branch No. 1 has been a gathering hall, as well as a place of remembrance, welcoming generations of veterans, families and Calgarians through its doors. Today that historical building needs our help. After decades of service, it is in urgent need of repairs, starting with its roof. This Canada Day, Calgarians are coming together to restore it, 4Reasoning · 31 wordsbecause this building is more than a hall. It is a promise kept to those who answered the call to defend the ideals of Canada, and it belongs to all Calgary. The ask · 20 wordsI encourage everyone to support this effort, honour our veterans and ensure that this landmark stands for generations to come.

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