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Karim Bardeesy

175 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 18 wordsI rise to congratulate and thank Young Voices Toronto on its 40th anniversary concert at Runnymede United Church.1Thanks Claims · 123 wordsFounder Ann Cooper Gay grew up in Palacios, Texas, came to Canada during the height of the Vietnam War, started teaching music here and founded what was then called the High Park Choirs in 1986, 234yet another example of the contribution of immigrants to our country. Since then, this remarkable organization, now led by artistic director and conductor Carole Anderson, has helped young people find confidence, friendship and a sense of belonging in Taiaiako’n—Parkdale—High Park and beyond through the timeless power of song.5 The anniversary concert last month was a celebration of Canada, featuring Canadian composers and featuring a stirring opening rendition of O Canada, one that sets a new bar for us as we plan to sing the same anthem here tomorrow.6 Thanks · 17 wordsTo all the voices at Young Voices Toronto, past and present, and their families, I thank them.Thanks Reasoning · 17 wordsIn this era of doomscrolling, when we lift our voices together we are stronger. We are better.

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