Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Kurt Holman

178 words · 13 sentences · 18 clauses

Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 15%Claims 42%Reasoning 8%Anecdote 35%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordsLondon has long been the canary in the coal mine for the hardships Canadians are feeling.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsWhen affordability worsens, unemployment rises and the Liberal recession deepens, Londoners are among the first to feel it, and our community is hit the hardest. Reasoning · 15 wordsThe Canadian promise was simple: work hard, do one’s part and build a stable life. Anecdote · 32 wordsThis weekend, while I was going for a walk, a fellow Londoner, Diana, pulled me aside. She is 55, works in a factory and cares for a mother who is battling cancer.Anecdote Claims · 26 wordsHowever, the cost of living has become so crushing that Diana now relies on her sick mother to help her buy basics like bread and milk. Anecdote · 23 wordsShe asked me, “Why is this happening when I’ve done everything right?” She is grieving a Canadian promise that no longer feels real.Anecdote Claims · 23 wordsIt is not just happening in London. About 38% of Canadians face food insecurity, 1and 40% are losing sleep over stretching their paycheques.2 Anecdote · 7 wordsDiana’s story is personal, but not unique.Anecdote Positioning · 11 wordsLondon has been the warning. Will the Liberal government finally listen?Positioning

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