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Robert Morrissey

158 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

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Greeting 11%Claims 56%Anecdote 18%Procedure 5%Promise 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordstoday, I would like to pay tribute to a remarkable young Prince Edward Island athlete, Abby Hustler.Greeting Claims · 47 wordsOver the last number of years, Abby has excelled as a hockey player. She played with the PWHL Minnesota Frost, now drafted by the expansion Hamilton team.1 Abby is the first Islander drafted to the Professional Women’s Hockey League.2 In my Egmont riding, the enthusiasm is enormous. Anecdote · 29 wordsIn fact, there is a debate among several communities that all claim Abby as their own: St. Louis, Ebbsfleet and Miminegash. Everybody wants to say “we knew her when”, AnecdoteClaims · 16 wordsand I know Abby’s parents, Paul and April, are absolutely thrilled with Abby’s accomplishments and career. Procedure · 8 wordsBeyond those great local rivalries, one fact remains: ProcedureClaims · 26 wordsAbby is a wonderful example of everything a young person from a small community can accomplish. She is a great role model for thousands of Islanders. Promise · 15 wordsI am looking forward to attending Abby Day on July 4 in Miminegash, her hometown.3

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