Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Alexandra Mendès

177 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

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Average 89 / 100
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Claims 55%Thanks 16%Anecdote 11%Reasoning 18%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 12 wordsthe Marlene Jennings Service Award will be launched later today in Montreal.1 Thanks · 29 wordsThe Hon. Marlene Jennings, the former member of Parliament for Notre-Dame-de-Grâce—Lachine, is an incredible role model for anyone who aspires to serve their country, their community or their peers.2Thanks Anecdote · 20 wordsI should know. She was my mentor when I was first elected and remains my sis friend to this day.Anecdote Claims · 85 wordsThis award establishes a new recognition model that directly reflects Marlene Jennings’ leadership style: collaborative, community focused, rule-breaking when necessary and always centred on empowering others. By shining a light on these change-makers and providing unrestricted funding, the proponents are not just celebrating those who serve so generously; 3they are accelerating their work and signalling to others that this different way of leading matters. I do not have time to go into detail about all of the criteria for this award, which honours unsung Quebeckers, Reasoning · 31 wordsbut I thought it would be a good idea for Canada to draw inspiration from this initiative to acknowledge everything that our fellow citizens do to make our communities so resilient.

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