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Shafqat Ali

63 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Stephanie Kusie (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada’s independent Information Commissioner said she was disappointed with the Liberal changes to access to information. Disappointed is an understatement, considering that yesterday, the President of the Treasury Board could not even respond to the question, and last week, he could not even find the right page. Will he rescind the changes, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Reasoning 19%Promise 38%Claims 43%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 12 wordswe believe that transparency and accountability are fundamental to a strong democracy. Promise · 24 wordsAs the President of the Treasury Board, I am committed to ensuring that Canadians can access government information in a timely and effective manner.Vague promise Claims · 27 wordsWe have launched a consultation paper as part of the process to make the access to information system better.1 My colleague’s comments were part of those consultations.Partly on point

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