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Jacob Mantle

100 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 91 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 20%Claims 41%Reasoning 14%The ask 20%The question 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsit was all fake, all an illusion. Liberal promises to work together on Bill C-22 were hollow from the start.Positioning Claims · 41 wordsThe Liberals will ram through the largest government surveillance operation in a generation. The Minister of Public Safety promised better. He promised he would work collaboratively, promised he would listen and promised he would take amendments.1 He is breaking those promises. Reasoning · 14 wordsPolice need the tools to catch the bad guys in a digital era, obviously. The ask · 20 wordsThat is why we proposed a solid compromise: pass the uncontroversial parts of the bill, and continue debating the others. The question · 5 wordsWill they take that offer?

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