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Jill McKnight

71 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Connie Cody (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, that answer was so empty it echoed. Five members of the Women Veterans Council have resigned, citing red tape and zero action. Among them are survivors of military sexual trauma, women who stood for Canada and now feel dismissed. Why has the minister broken her promises, refused to act and completely abandoned these female veterans?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 58%Claims 31%Promise 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 41 wordsI thank all members of the Women Veterans Council for their service to our country and for the advice and insight they offer as a council. Their lived experiences have shaped important conversations, and I remain grateful to the ongoing conversations.Thanks Claims · 22 wordsIt is a voluntary advisory group, 1and I respect the decision of any member who chooses to move on to other opportunities. Promise · 8 wordsI welcome all advocacy on issues affecting veterans.Partly on point

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