“Mr. Speaker, last week, I mentioned that a company from back home, Garaga, had provided the government with overwhelming evidence that garage doors imported from China contained harmful toxic substances that are banned in Canada. Why, despite these warnings, has the Minister of Health not done anything about this yet?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 76. The grade is held to 73, 30 above Clarity.
73 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 41%Anecdote 10%Promise 48%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 7 wordsGaraga is an iconic brand in Canada.Anecdote · 6 wordsI have Garaga garage doors myself.1AnecdotePromise · 15 wordsI will continue to support this Quebec-based company, just as I do all Quebec-based companies.Partly on pointVague promiseClaims · 17 wordsIf Garaga has an issue it needs to raise with the government, then it should do so, Promise · 13 wordsand I can assure the hon. member that we will act very quickly.Vague promise