“Mr. Speaker, in July, thousands of federal public servants will return to the office four days a week, but several departments are saying there is not enough office space. I would like to ask the President of the Treasury Board how many employees will not have a desk next month.”
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsthat is an important question as we prepare for a return to the office four days a week across the public service.1PositioningPromise · 42 wordsI can assure her that my department, in collaboration with the Secretariat of the Treasury Board, is working around the clock to make sure that public servants have the space and the tools they need to do their important work for Canadians.Partly on pointVague promise