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Sébastien Lemire

188 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to know if there is anything my colleague has not mentioned. This evening, we are considering Bill C-26. Is there any aspect of Bill C-26 that has not been mentioned that my colleague would like to address?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 76%The ask 7%Positioning 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordsone issue that is very important to me, particularly as the member for Abitibi—Témiscamingue, is access to housing for first nations. The ask · 13 wordsI would like to see a program created by and for first nations. Claims · 43 wordsI am thinking in particular of the Yänonhchia’ program, 1which aims to develop indigenous expertise but is not necessarily reaching the communities because of the way federal programs are designed. In every budget, the federal government allocates billions of dollars for indigenous infrastructure, 2Positioning · 11 wordsand it presents that as though it is something really wonderful.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 58 wordsEven today, $4.5 billion is being set aside for access to clean drinking water.3Off point In reality, however, expertise is not being developed within first nations.Unearned certainty So many unattainable standards and requirements are imposed on the communities that, one year later, Partly on pointbecause the deadlines are extremely tight, Ottawa takes its money back and puts it back in the coffers. Positioning · 21 wordsIt then pats itself on the back for properly managing the money, since, in the end, it spent less than expected.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsAt the end of the day, the needs remain unchanged and the quality of life for first nations is getting worse.Off point

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