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Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe

76 words · 11 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Sébastien Lemire (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, here we are discussing a bill that concerns unconditional transfers to the provinces and the topic of Manitoba comes up. I find that interesting. I had the opportunity to visit its legislative assembly in late summer. Interestingly, Louis Riel has finally been recognized as Manitoba’s first premier. I am drawing a blank. I would like my colleague to remind us what the federal government did to Louis Riel. I think the matter is relevant to a study of this bill.”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 91%Aside 5%Positioning 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 7 wordswhat happened was that he was hanged.1 Aside · 4 wordsI am not kidding.Aside Claims · 38 wordsLouis Riel was hanged because he was fighting for his people. There are statues standing today. Liberal hero Sir John A. Macdonald had Louis Riel hanged.2 Today, some members opposite rise in celebration of Sir John A.3 Macdonald. Positioning · 3 wordsIt is unbelievable.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsA member for Manitoba is applauding Sir John A.4 Macdonald, who hanged a man who was fighting for his people and for his language.Off point

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