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Jenny Kwan

121 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Jean-Denis Garon (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, with all due respect to my colleague, it seems there is some sort of party going on in the Liberal lobby. Perhaps it would be appropriate to ask them to quiet down, please.”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Claims 17%Procedure 6%Positioning 26%The ask 29%Reasoning 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordsto the point where they are making disruptive noises that interfere with the debate in the House, that is inappropriate. Procedure · 7 wordsLet me just conclude my comments here.Procedure Positioning · 28 wordsThe government wants to ram this through. The Liberals want unanimous consent from all the parties to somehow magically just support them in whatever they want to do, PositioningThe ask · 35 wordsbut we actually want accountability. We want the government to deliver results for the people, for Canada, for Canadians who are struggling with the housing crisis, not just to hand over cheques without accountability measures. Positioning · 4 wordsThat is the difference.Positioning Reasoning · 27 wordsThe market will not fix the problem. What will fix the problem is a policy choice of investing in the people and for people ahead of profits.Partly on point

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