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Jenny Kwan

169 words · 14 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Dan Muys (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague from British Columbia raises a question about what the outcomes are for $1.7 billion in funding that we are supposed to approve in the House, based on a two-paragraph bill. Did the hon. member find in any place in the bill, or in what she has read about it, any sort of targets in terms of the housing, whether it is deeply affordable housing or otherwise, that would be built with the $1.7 billion?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
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Procedure 4%Claims 88%Positioning 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordsthat is precisely the point.Procedure Claims · 125 wordsThere would be no accountability measures. There would be nothing to which one can say that using $1.7 billion of taxpayers’ money would generate a specific return for the people in Canada. There would be zero accountability measures and zero targets.1 There is none of that information whatsoever in the bill.2 As I was saying earlier, I was trying to get from the government what exactly the allocation would be and what the formula is that the government used to decide how to divide the money between the provinces and territories. The Liberals could not even give me that. It was after much to-do, when they were desperate to try to get a unanimous consent motion through, that they then came forward with that information.3 Procedure · 2 wordsGuess what.Procedure Claims · 14 wordsA whole bunch of provinces would be getting only $10 million out of this.4 Positioning · 9 wordsThat would not address the housing crisis, would it?Positioning Claims · 10 wordsThe government just says, “Trust us. We will fix it.” Positioning · 4 wordsOh, will it really?Positioning

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