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Jenny Kwan

108 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Elizabeth May (Green)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank the hon. member for Vancouver East for an extremely important review of the gaps between the spring economic statement and the reality for Canadians. I just wonder if she would like to expand on any of the points she has made, because they were excellent.”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 27%Reasoning 8%Positioning 65%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 29 wordsthe people sleeping outside tonight cannot wait. The seniors choosing between food and medication cannot wait, and the constituents facing administrative collapse in a federal compensation program cannot wait. Reasoning · 9 wordsBudgets reveal values, and this bill reveals them clearly. Positioning · 70 wordsCanadians deserve an economy built on fairness, transparency and delivery, not on delay and indifference. They deserve a government that is willing to govern for all Canadians, not just for the hedge fund managers, the private equity CEOs and the finance bros who hang out at the Empire Club of Canada in downtown Toronto, such as the Prime Minister and his narrow circle of insiders.Mockery Everyday working Canadians deserve better.PositioningPartly on point

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